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Tuesday, 27 October 2015

My time with Autumn

My time with Autumn at school


Today at morning tea I played a game with my best friend Autumn. We were playing relays and Autumn and I came as a draw in  relays.  When we finished Autumn says this to me “do you want to play tiggy with my friends”, and so I said “yes”, so she went with me to the playground and we saw her friends playing tiggy and they were in. After that I was in, and I ran as fast as I could to tag Autumn. Later on we were all thirsty. So we went to the drinking fountain and started drinking the water one by one. The bell rang and so we had to go to class.

We had S.S.R and we were reading about the solar system, but Autumn and I didn’t know that Mercury was the smallest planet in the solar system we thought it was pluto. The milk monitor gave our milk to us, we started drinking the milk, but behind the milk there was facts about our body parts and how to keep ourselves strong and have protein inside of us. Our teacher told us that “each reading group will read stories about the solar system”. There was a story about a black hole in the galaxy and they might be more planets in the universe, even though there are 9 planets in the galaxy.

It was almost lunch time, so Autumn and I got out our lunch, grabbed a fruit and even the fruit was really sweet and juicy, got our hats and went outside.
Autumn went to the playground really quick and I came to the park after her. She was scared to jump to the second spinning wheel, because she thought that she would fall off. So Autumn says “I am not going to jump to the second spinning wheel”. The bark always came on our faces when we always fall down. And then we were walking to the tree to play, but Autumn was singing really loud and I did not know that she could sing.

So the bell rang because lunch time was over and so we went to class to do some class work and the exciting thing about our class work was art and I love doing art.
We were doing van gogh flowers for art and so Autumn and I were working together, but the hardest thing was lining the grids which Autumn and I got stuck on.

At the end our teacher told us to pack up our art paper and clean up our classroom so it can be spotless for our learning tomorrow. The students got their bags and went back home with their family.

I felt really amazed because I got to spend time with my best friend Autumn and we had a lot of fun at the playground playing tiggy with her friends.

Monday, 31 August 2015

Gabriella and the man!





On day when Gabriella woke up she looked out her window and it was a fine hot sunny day. She got ready and so her mother called out Gabriella’s name, “Gabriella it’s time to go to the mall” her mother said. They went in the car and drove off.

Meanwhile Gabriella and her mother went to the shop to get some snacks and clothes for their family. After that a man with a black hoodie with red stripe on  it came toward her mother and Gabriella didn’t know that he was coming near her mother. The man stole her mother’s walt and he ran away real fast and so she put her hand inside her pocket and so she said “ oh my gosh where is my wallet!” said mum. In a meanwhile Gabriella went to look for the person that took her mother’s wallet and so she came back and she said “mum I can’t look for the person who have took your wallet” said Gabriella. Later on the mum said “ Gabriella I'm going to the mall”. Next the man went to Gabriella’s house and knocked on the door. After she opened the door and said “ hello who are you and why are you here” Gabriella said and then the man replied “ can I talk to your mum please” and Gabriella said “ my mum is at the mall and no don’t come near my mum okay”.  Mum come back from the mall and so she said “ oh my gosh where are you Gabriella!”. Mum was really worry and mum heard a knock on the door and opened it for no good. It was the man and mum looked into his eyes and knew that he tooked Gabriella. So mum said “ okay if you're here and you know that I live do you know anything about us like our passcode, what is our passcode said mum, “ I am going to call the police on you that you came over and kidnapped my daughter Gabriella. After that the police came and took the man to jail and then mum saw her wallet inside the man’s pocket and so she grab it out and ran inside the house.

Mum went to look for Gabriella and found her tied up at the tree. Gabriella said “ mum thank you for looking for me” and so they lived happily ever after!

Wednesday, 3 June 2015

My writing task!

WALT: use conjunctions to extend sentences.
SC: use conjunctions to add more detail to an idea.

You need to persuade the reader, explaining to them whether you agree or disagree with this statement

Give examples and explain why

Actions speak louder than words.

Actions speak louder than words because
if you say something nice like “I like your T-shirt”
and you make a angry face the other person wouldn’t feel that you didn’t mean it.

How you look: 55%
How you say it: 38%
What you say:7%

Respecting Property:If someone threw their jumper away you go pick it up and give it to him/her.
Respecting Others:I respect others by speaking nicely to them
and by doing the right things to other people.
Respecting Learning:If a person comes in class and then they see me
working independently,working hard and finishing my tasks.
Respecting Environment:If my teacher tells me to pick up the
rubbish and put it in the bin I have to do it straight away.
Respecting Self:If my teacher tells me to sit up nicely and fold my
legs I have listened what my teacher said and do it straight away
by respecting myself.

By doing these things I will show people that actions speaks louder than
words and by respecting these POLES, Property, Others, Learning, Environment,
and Self.