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Thursday, 30 July 2015

My poem about angry!

Angry

Angry is red like revenge
It taste like sweet pepper from Texas
It smells like the hot burning sun coming on my face
It looks like the clash of fear
It sounds like people fighting in vein
It feels like being mean

Angry

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  1. Unknown30 July 2015 at 14:12

    "burning sun on my face." When we are angry it can feel like that doesn't it!

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  2. Luisa31 July 2015 at 09:50

    Great poem Newsam. "It sounds like people fighting in vein". What might that look like? ""it tastes like sweet pepper from Texas", what would happen when you taste the sweet pepper? A lot of adjectives which is really great. Keep up the great work Newsam.

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  3. Newsam P10 August 2015 at 07:23

    Thank you luisa for your lovely comment.

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  4. Anonymous19 May 2016 at 08:47

    ANGER COMING TO YOU!!!

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  6. Anonymous13 August 2018 at 11:45

    good work

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